Comments on: Closed Doors

By: twisted

twisted — Tue, 05 Apr 2011 23:31:09 +0000

I know just how you feel. Most people don’t. I’m 13. The only kid in my own school that is emo besides this 16 year old guy in (i believe 8th grade) and i can’t talk to him =/ life sucks with out people to help you threw it. And it’s hard trying to stay strong. Your a GREAT poem writer. <3 I'm sorry.

By: darkemogirl24

darkemogirl24 — Fri, 18 Mar 2011 02:07:49 +0000

One Last Breath
The last breath I must have is the one with you,
That one last breath must be with the person I love,
That one last breath must mean something to that person because I will be gone forever,
For that I am grateful to have that person in my life to save me from myself.

By: nikki

nikki — Wed, 09 Feb 2011 16:39:25 +0000

wow i love this peice it relates to me so much with the “Bracelet�s Cover My Wrists,
Hiding The Painful Truth Under Them,
A Burning Shame Which No One Should Know,
The Scars Deep And Raw” part going on there luv it all so much

By: jazz

jazz — Mon, 10 Jan 2011 19:11:04 +0000

omg amazing

By: LONELY EMO KID

LONELY EMO KID — Fri, 19 Nov 2010 00:45:42 +0000

i completely understand you i have so many secret’s behind closed doors i feel so outburst all the time but i keep my cool im a cutter and a self-abuser (if you know what that means)everytime i get mad with my self it turns out on me someway ,somehow

By: kathya guardado kramer

kathya guardado kramer — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 19:26:34 +0000

love your poem and i know exactly how you feel i know that you are maybe going through promblems.
i am to alot
i sorta have tryed suicide but there is always something that ends up stopping me but its what ever i will soon get to reach my goal hopefully

By: izzy alvey

izzy alvey — Tue, 05 Oct 2010 18:57:13 +0000

im not sure if i cant relate , but its really good and i hate how people judge me just because i cut im not hurting myself at all . just the people that love me .

By: madeline

madeline — Sat, 04 Sep 2010 23:23:27 +0000

i know how u feel

By: RaWRNikole

RaWRNikole — Wed, 17 Feb 2010 19:42:25 +0000

I loved this…

By: Jessie

Jessie — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 06:56:34 +0000

im addicted to the knife, the soft sting of a cut, driping blood to the floor but yet i continue to want more… will it ever be enough… how long to the liquid runs out in my veins, until the last beat of my dying heart i will love these words you wrote and keep them dearly close cause its a common tale that doesnt have to share the same fate… love the poem hope to hear more.

By: Sam

Sam — Sat, 24 Jan 2009 03:22:04 +0000

theres nothing wrong with cutting yourself its not a problem that therapy can fix its a life style that you cant change

By: Sherilyn

Sherilyn — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 18:26:27 +0000

do u really cut yourself?
ouch
Try some therapy or somthing to make you stop
or ignore the people who are bothering you

By: Dayna

Dayna — Fri, 02 Jan 2009 02:29:57 +0000

wow…. this is REALLY good…. i know how you feel