Pain Is Great
The bleeding wont stop,
I cut too deep,
My hand is numb,
I’m falling asleep.
The pain is great,
I still can’t believe,
When i needed you most,
You decided to leave.
My face is wet,
Why am i crying,
You’re making her laugh,
While I’m here dying.
But before I leave,
I just have to say,
I love you so so much,
You’ll see you do too…..
…One day….
By Jenell
em0 guRl said,
that poem remides me of MeeE cause thats tHe wAy I FeEl as weLL lolll
mz.lagrimas(mz.tears) said,
THE PAIN WNT GO AWAY AS LIE HERE ND STAY AWAKE I SEE THE BLOOD FALL BUT TILL THEN ILL STAND HERE TALL. I CUT I BLEED I BEG OF U ON MY KNEES TO STAY HERE PLZ WITHOUT YOU I WILL CRY ND IF I CUT MY SELF I CAN DIE. UR AWSOME KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK
Nina said,
I like it but its kinda sad 5 out of 10
Carley said,
I <3 your peom. It reminds me of me when I was younger. Your an amzing poet. Donnt stop doing what your doing.
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